Comments: Story! *Shudder* It scared me...

Very nice story, but you crept the shit out of me with that "blue arm" thingy ... I liked the beginning the most ... then I started losing you closer to the end ... but the end (even though weird) almost makes you feel like you are really there. Nice job. Show your english teacher.

Posted by AP Java Freshman at September 17, 2004 05:40 AM

Wow, that's some serious creepiness. Well-written, though. You've got this whole Poe thing going for you. I tried to write a creepy-ish story a while ago, and it kind of sucked.

Posted by Rebecca at September 17, 2004 09:29 PM

As I always say, sell it on EBay!

Posted by Felipe at September 17, 2004 10:53 PM
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