Very nice story, but you crept the shit out of me with that "blue arm" thingy ... I liked the beginning the most ... then I started losing you closer to the end ... but the end (even though weird) almost makes you feel like you are really there. Nice job. Show your english teacher.

Wow, that's some serious creepiness. Well-written, though. You've got this whole Poe thing going for you. I tried to write a creepy-ish story a while ago, and it kind of sucked.

As I always say, sell it on EBay!
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