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Nice! You know it's a good story when the reader honestly makes the effort to unravel the message at the end. Really well-written.

Posted by Eric at January 26, 2007 04:13 PM

     I actually don't like my third-person narrative very much. This story was rather hastily put together, so I think it's not so great. The part that I spent time on is the paragraph. I plan on having this read in a funny accent with piano and whatnot soon.

Posted by Kit at January 27, 2007 02:28 AM

That was annoyingly simple to figure out. =0

Posted by Ben at January 28, 2007 06:03 PM

Needs work (but good).

Posted by Nic P at February 2, 2007 08:20 AM

Nic P? Nic Greek P? If that's you, PLEASE TELL ME!

Posted by Ben at February 6, 2007 09:17 PM

It is, indeed, I.

Posted by at February 9, 2007 04:01 PM

Dude, Nic! I played against a guy in Halo 2 online that was called Mr. Papadapolous! (although im surei spelled it wrong)! Was that you!? And btw, how have you been mate?

Posted by Ben at February 17, 2007 05:47 PM

Fine and no, that was not me.

PS: I'm coming back this April!

Posted by at March 3, 2007 01:52 PM
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