Comments: Creative Writing: When you can't get an idea out

You have gotten so much better at writing. I especially like "the feel of the breeze with the smell of a little store round the corner." And over all the tone is just really really nice.

Can we walk somewhere?

Posted by suzi at May 29, 2007 07:56 PM

Fine story, although perhaps a bit TOO surreal and intensely philosophical. Still much better than anything I could do of course.

Posted by Ben at May 30, 2007 03:31 PM
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